Yeah...I'm going to give this card to a girl I like and would like to know if any of guys or girls know any good rhymes? I'm planning on writting it tomorrow so if you have please post it soon. Any help is appreciated.
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I like the life I lived, because I went from negative to positive.
You know very well who you are, don't let them hold you down, reach for the stars.
if was me
than i'll get on my knee
because girls don't like cards
so i'll go out in the yard
and pick her some flowers
and hope she won't be to sour.
So just forget the card
that shouldn't be to hard.
if was me
than i'll get on my knee
because girls don't like cards
so i'll go out in the yard
and pick her some flowers
and hope she won't be to sour.
So just forget the card
that shouldn't be to hard.
That sucks. Don't ever tell that to anyone else.
I actually did write a poem for someone for Valentines Day this year. I can't tell you because I know you guys will steal it and try to take credit. I refuse to let anyone get sex at my expense.
i never write a girl poems, because I think they are to cheasy.
You just don't like the girl. The point of a poem is to express emotions. But if you don't have any positive, altruistic emotions towards a girl you just don't really care for her so obviously poems would be cheezy for you since you don't mean whatever you wrote in them. :rolleyes: Just wrote them to get sex as goodguy said.
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dude are you crazy my rhyme are tight
No, they do suck, actually. Unless you spent a minute on it.
I'm with those people that say to just write what you feel.
However, don't try and force it to rhyme. If your words manage to do it on their own, great, but don't force it. Maybe it's just me, but I always find that forced-to-rhyme poems don't flow very well, hence making them cheesy.
And if you find yourself wanting to use the same words over and over, use a thesaurus. :rolleyes:
I've got all night to come up with a poem for the girl I'm seeing. I've been dating her for several weeks now, and everything's been going super awesome. I want to make things official tomorrow, so I bought her a nice necklace and a card. She goes to college, so I'm gonna leave the card and a rose at her first class so she can find it when she gets there, and afterwards I'm gonna take her to our favorite park and give her the necklace to wear.
The key to making Valentines Day (or any day really) is to make it unique and thought out. Don't just give someone a letter, give her something to think about throughout the day and then make the end of the day fantastic. It's not about you, its about her. Be sweet, romantic, or even just awesome. Don't try to get anywhere, let her decide what she wants to give you. That's all I really gotta say, and some of you know me as a somewhat smart guy when it comes to relationships.
Take my word for it though, and you'll be happy with yourself. Btw, nice effort making the card right before you actually give it to her.
Well, I took your advice and created my own poem and I wanted to know what you guys thought of it before I gave it to her. It's not long, but it's all I have.
A star you must be Most beautiful off all Because you have won me Ever since I can recall
One may say love is a thing that will decay That affection is a marvel that will pass away On this day, another may say Love is a thing that will never delay
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I like the life I lived, because I went from negative to positive.
You know very well who you are, don't let them hold you down, reach for the stars.
Just drop your heart on the paper, if you honestly love her then it will show on the paper, whether it rhymes or is even a poem, she will know how you feel.
And if she doesn't, then she's a bitch ass cunt mother fucker from hell and you deserve better. *Nods sagely.*
Well, I took your advice and created my own poem and I wanted to know what you guys thought of it before I gave it to her. It's not long, but it's all I have.
A star you must be Most beautiful off all Because you have won me Ever since I can recall
One may say love is a thing that will decay That affection is a marvel that will pass away On this day, another may say Love is a thing that will never delay
It doesn't flow right. Idea is good, execution is mediocre. Not trying to be a dick, but thats my honest opinion.
To find the truth, you must risk everything.
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To find the truth, you must risk everything.
but don't do it if it will cause you stress
so just do it from your heart
and don't be a fart.
than i'll get on my knee
because girls don't like cards
so i'll go out in the yard
and pick her some flowers
and hope she won't be to sour.
So just forget the card
that shouldn't be to hard.
That sucks. Don't ever tell that to anyone else.
I actually did write a poem for someone for Valentines Day this year. I can't tell you because I know you guys will steal it and try to take credit. I refuse to let anyone get sex at my expense.
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they are more fun than flying kites
i would have to agree with most of them to write it from your heart.
Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings.
No, they do suck, actually. Unless you spent a minute on it.
However, don't try and force it to rhyme. If your words manage to do it on their own, great, but don't force it. Maybe it's just me, but I always find that forced-to-rhyme poems don't flow very well, hence making them cheesy.
And if you find yourself wanting to use the same words over and over, use a thesaurus. :rolleyes:
What if you're just a very bad poet? Though what you are saying is partly true.
It's the decisions you make when you have no time to make them that define who you are.
The key to making Valentines Day (or any day really) is to make it unique and thought out. Don't just give someone a letter, give her something to think about throughout the day and then make the end of the day fantastic. It's not about you, its about her. Be sweet, romantic, or even just awesome. Don't try to get anywhere, let her decide what she wants to give you. That's all I really gotta say, and some of you know me as a somewhat smart guy when it comes to relationships.
Take my word for it though, and you'll be happy with yourself. Btw, nice effort making the card right before you actually give it to her.
A star you must be
Most beautiful off all
Because you have won me
Ever since I can recall
One may say love is a thing that will decay
That affection is a marvel that will pass away
On this day, another may say
Love is a thing that will never delay
To find the truth, you must risk everything.
you didn't pull that out of your hat
man i'm so good at making rhymes
that it should be a crime.
I still have a copy of that poem somewhere...
Just drop your heart on the paper, if you honestly love her then it will show on the paper, whether it rhymes or is even a poem, she will know how you feel.
And if she doesn't, then she's a bitch ass cunt mother fucker from hell and you deserve better. *Nods sagely.*
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It doesn't flow right. Idea is good, execution is mediocre. Not trying to be a dick, but thats my honest opinion.
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