Where are you exactly? The section the asked 'How your character was captured' really only pertained to the beginning of the story. Any knew people have been met throughout our journey. I don't really know what Party_Foul or Zhar would want to do, but that's my impression.
Zhar I think you had it a bit confused. I walked into the house and checked my wounds. Then I ran out and shapeshifted to a hawk, trying to fly to safety, but I didn't make it and fell to the ground. That's where Jeru and Cateyes ran over to me.
I know you're not really supposed to put your life into someone else's hands in RPs, but I was bored and I hope someone can save me. If not that's cool too, I'll just miraculously be fine. Maybe reincarnation or something, I am a druid.
So I guess Azriel is joining the group up rather than at the very beginning. I figured from the character sheet that he was going to be at the beginning. Not that it really matters because I think that it played out well this way.
The only thing I noticed was the Fallen coming in the tavern and the door being shut. Shatterer had now made it clear that the door is shut. The biggest thing with these RPs is trying to allow the reader to understand your timeline. How I see the lastest events are:
We arrived at the town, some of us went to the bar, we had drinks, Fallen envaded, we all started to kill everything, (unknown... yet) has made their entrance, stopping time.
The hardest thing to understand is when people just put a reply to a post right above their's. When I haven't posted in a while I typically like to at least recap previous things that have happened. Also, I'll use thoughts rather than dialouge because if you use dialouge it seems like you were ignored :P. In my lastest post I recaped walking into the bar, since we have moved into fighting off the Fallen.
I don't know if that really helps you at all, but none the less there's some tips. Anyway, you can always ask us in this thread if you need help understanding something and I would expect everyone would be happy to help.
Personally, I would rather fast forward to the city, but I feel that Zhar or Party_Foul should post it since they're leading the RP. However, if people want to continue the talk and the journey to the city, I'm fine with that too.