Well if you have so much that is already laid out, this LOTR theme makes me even more perplex.
Was it really required of you to include these characters that don't seem to fit at all in there(except for Azriel)? If this bastardization was at least funny, it would have been entertaining I guess.
What I mean by that is that you picked a recognizable title with defined chars, so in all likeliness people drawn to this fanfic probably know all about LOTR. Whether Gandalf as a 'huge UW fan and...his rage manifests itself in a hurricane of thrashing, swearing, and, ultimately, self mutilation.' will entertain people, I truly doubt. But maybe that's just me.
What's UW, by the way?
Anyway, keep on writing.
Like I previously said- I hope it eventually makes sense, my precious.
Anyway I'm keeping my 'comments' on this story until Az writes up some more. Just giving it a chance really because up till now it simply looks like angry-emo-kid rant.
But who knows, it could drastically change and have some relevancy to its title other than being a failed parody.
Eh...did I say I was keeping my comments? I guess not.
Point is, Az got a good writing style and is sufficiently creative so as to expect way better stuff from him.
Dunno what this thing here is about really. His mind seem to have been poisoned by that Harry Potter fanfic but never mind that.
That's why I said Voldemort and flying rein deers would totally rock that shit.
You better deliver, bitch.
Was it really required of you to include these characters that don't seem to fit at all in there(except for Azriel)? If this bastardization was at least funny, it would have been entertaining I guess.
What I mean by that is that you picked a recognizable title with defined chars, so in all likeliness people drawn to this fanfic probably know all about LOTR. Whether Gandalf as a 'huge UW fan and...his rage manifests itself in a hurricane of thrashing, swearing, and, ultimately, self mutilation.' will entertain people, I truly doubt. But maybe that's just me.
What's UW, by the way?
Anyway, keep on writing.
Like I previously said- I hope it eventually makes sense, my precious.
Nasty trollsss. Zey shood juss goe avay.
Anyway I'm keeping my 'comments' on this story until Az writes up some more. Just giving it a chance really because up till now it simply looks like angry-emo-kid rant.
But who knows, it could drastically change and have some relevancy to its title other than being a failed parody.
Eh...did I say I was keeping my comments? I guess not.
Point is, Az got a good writing style and is sufficiently creative so as to expect way better stuff from him.
Dunno what this thing here is about really. His mind seem to have been poisoned by that Harry Potter fanfic but never mind that.
That's why I said Voldemort and flying rein deers would totally rock that shit.
Anyway I hope there's Voldemort and flying reindeers in that story or it won't make any sense, you know.