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A short short I wrote this morning. Link.

Nice story. I liked how you got the innocent feelings of the young children. I also really like your style. It just reads very easily. The combination of your narration and dialogue flows very well. I also enjoyed the simplicity of the story yet its theme being true for so many circumstances.

All in all, great read.

Hey! Another bot that resurrects another of the Hamster's short stories. At least they have taste.

Awww, the link doesn't work... I'm a sad panda.